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(二)语言(满分8)
词数:
每少5个单词扣0.5分,以此类推。
只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写:
每处错误扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数。
语法:
每处错误扣0.5分,同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写:
每两处错误扣0.5分,但扣分总和不超过1分。
(三)组织结构(满分4)
内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;
词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3-4分。
内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误;
词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给2分。
一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
内容和语言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分。
分类作文提纲
一、话题:
友情
二、写作思路及结构:
1.在审题时,学生要注意描写友情时,内容不能太空洞,而是要通过实例来突出某一项品质,或者对自己的影响等;
以及朋友是通过哪些具体的方法帮助自己。
2.注意使用连接词以及高级词汇,使文章逻辑清晰,内容充实;
用具体的实例支撑我的观点。
最后进行总结;
3.围绕友谊可以给出一些建议或者保持友谊的秘诀。
三、高频词:
happiness,precious,friendship,colorful,meaningful,problems,comfort,regard,
discuss,important,charming,smile,success,confident,responsibility,Inmyopinion,Independence,brave,encourage,experiences,succeed,difficulties,unforgettable,friendly,suggestions,helpful,understand,unbelievable,disappointed,difficult,boring,improve
四、高频短语:
getreadyfor,learnabout,byourselves,asoftenaspossible,faceourfuturelife,giveup,makefriends,getonwellwith,makeefforts,atthattime,believeinthemselves,makesomemistakes,makegreatprogress,trymybestto,communicatewith,lookforwardsto,havesomeproblemswith,dealwith,stopthemfromdoingit,assoonaspossible,haveanunforgettableexperience,increaseourknowledge
五、高频句型:
1.首句:
如:
(1)XXXisthe–estpersonthatIhaveevermet.WheneverIthinkabouthim,Icannotbutfeel…
(2)doing…isthe–estthingthatIhaveeverdone.Iwillneverforgetthe…momentsthatIspendwithXXX
(3)Itiswidelyacceptedthatfriendshipplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.
(4)Itiscommonknowledgethat
(5)Throughoutmylife,themostunforgettablepersonI’veevermetis
(6)Ofall(thepersons)Ihaveeverknown/met,(sb.)istheoneIrespect/lovemost.
(7)Whenspeakingofsomeoneorsomethingthatgivesmecourage,thefirstthingtocomeintomymindisthatmybestfriendgivesmecouragewhenIamintrouble.
(8)Noonecanlivewithoutfriends.
(9)Nobodycangetthroughlifewithoutfriendship.
(10)Friendssharehappinesswithus.Inaddition,theykeepusfromsadness.
2.内容:
要点:
(1)Firstofall,it’sagoodchoicetodo……
(2)What’smore,we/you’dbetterdo……insteadofdoing……
(3)Lastbutnotleast,we/youaresupposedtodo……
(4)Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat...
(5)Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.
(6)Friendshipmultipliesjoysanddividesgriefs.
(7)Yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull.
(8)Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.
(9)WheneverIamblue,theycomfortmeandhelpmefindsolutionstomyproblems.
(10)Friendshipislikealeafonthetree.Thoughtheyaresmallandordinary,withoutthemthetreewillbeugly
3.尾句:
(1)Onlyinthisway,canwe……
(2)Believeitornot,ifyoutrytofindfriendship,friendswillbealwaysaroundyou.
(3)Accordingtomypersonalexperience,Icompletelyunderstandthemeaningofthefamoussaying:
Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.
(4)Afterthat,Ilearntthat
(5)Ididn’trealizehowgreatmyfriendwasuntilthen.
(6)Fromthisexperience,Irealize/havelearnedhowimportantfriendshipis.
(7)Hiswordsenrichedmylifeanddidalotofgoodtomygrowth.I’msurehislovewillleadmetomysuccessandIwilllovehimforever!
(8)Inconclusion,Ibelievethat...
(9)Inaword,weshould
(10)Inaword,friendsareourmostpreciouswealthandfriendshipisnecessarytoeveryone.
六、范文:
Ⅶ.Writing
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_____________haschangedme”(以“__________改变了我”为题。
写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
)
成长路上,你曾经遇见过很多人,如一位师长、一个朋友等,你也曾经经历过很多事,如一次比赛、一项活动等,这些人与事或多或少改变了你,让你变成更好的自己。
请选择其中某件事或某个人,以“____________haschangedme”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)。
(注意:
段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
范文:
Myfriendhaschangedme
Whenspeakingofsomeoneorsomethingthathaschangedme,thefirstthingtocomeintomymindisthatwhatmybestfriendsaidtomewhenIwasintrouble.IhadtroubleinlearningEnglish.However,wheneverIplantogiveupmyEnglish,mybestfriendalwaysencouragesmetohaveanothertry.ShetoldmethatifIgaveitup,andthatmeantIhadfailed.What’smore,mybestfriendwouldliketobewithmeandteachmeEnglish.Atlast,withherhelp,IbecamemoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandmyEnglishimprovedalot.
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_______bringsmehappiness”(以“______为我带来快乐”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
我们的生活多姿多彩,在学习和生活中,总有一些经历,习惯,爱好或一些人为你带来快乐。
请结合自身经历,谈谈你的感想。
短文中不得出现任何人名,学校及其他信息。
否则不予评分。
Thefollowingisonlyforreferenceonly(以下表达仅供参考)
※befullof
※make...happy
※befondof
Friendbringsmehappiness
Ibelievethateveryonecanliveahappylife.Inmyopinion,itisfriendthatbringsmehappiness.WhenI'
mintrouble,myfriendsarealwaysaroundmeandreadytodomeafavor,whichmakesmehappy.However,friendshipisaroundwayticket.Ihavealreadyreceivedsomuchlove.Therefore,inordertokeepourfriendshipstrong,Ishoulddomoretohelpmyfriends.Ishouldlistentothempatientlywhenthey'
reannoyedbysomething.Also,Ishouldgivemyshouldertothemwhentheyfeelsad.AndIshouldshareallmyhappinesswiththemsothatthehappinessistwicethanbefore.
Allinall,friendcanbringalotofhappiness.Whydon'
tyoubuildawonderfulfriendshipforyourself,myfriend?
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WhenIhavetroublewithmybestfriend”
【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】
提示:
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾,当你与朋友间产生不愉快后,你会如何处理此类问题呢?
请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由,可结合自身经历进行阐述。
(注意短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
WhenIhavetroublewithmybestfriend
Similaraswearetoourfriends,wearedistinctandindependentindividuals.Sometimeswemaydifferinviewsandhavetroublewitheachother.However,itiscommunicationandunderstandingthatreallymatter.
WhenIhavetroublewithmybestfriend,Iwon’twithdrawbutcontacthimtimely,figureoutwhathasgonewrongandworkoutaplantorebuildfriendship.Tosomedegree,Ioweapermanent,steadyanddynamicrelationshiptomutualunderstanding.AttentionshouldbepaidtosimilaritiesratherthanhoveringoverdifferencesifIamtocultivateourfriendship.Furthermore,asIhavechosenhimtobeanintimatefriend,Ishouldneverbeconqueredbyobstaclesthataremeanttotestmyheartandadvancerelationship.
Toconclude,whatevertroubleIhavewithmyfriends,Iwillreservedifferences,seekcommonground.
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"
Thatday,Imadea/an___________”(以“那天,我(做)了一(个)_____________”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
生活中的每一次体验、每一段经历都为你的成长助力。
你或许交了一个新朋友、许了一个新愿望、作了一次新选择………,请分享一段你的经历,并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。
Thatday,Imadeafriend
LastSaturdaywasmybirthday.Myparentsopenedabirthdaypartyforme.Theyinvitedmanypeopletothewonderfulparty.Iwasveryhappy.ThehappiestthingwasImadeanewfriend.Shewasabeautifulgirl,wearingayellowdress.Whenweatecake,apieceofcakefellonherdress.Ilentmyowndresstoher,shethankedmemanytimes.Wetalkedalotandbecamefriendsthatday.Ilearnedthatwewouldfeelhappywhenwehelpothers.
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“givesmecourage”(以“让我鼓起勇气”为题,写一篇不少60字的短文,标点符号不占格)
在生活或学习中我们难免会遇到一些困难与挫折,面对困难我们需要鼓起勇气。
请结合你的一次自身经历,补充完整标题,说一说什么令你鼓起勇气,谈一谈你是如何勇敢克服困难的。
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则扣分。
Thefollowingisforreferenceonly(以下表达仅供参考)
havedifficultyin….
Encouragemeto….
Trymybestto….
范文:
Mybestfriendgivesmecourage
Whenspeakingofsomeoneorsomethingthatgivesmecourage,thefirstthingtocomeintomymindisthatmybestfriendgivesmecouragewhenIamintrouble.
IhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.However,wheneverIplantogiveupmyEnglish,mybestfriendalwaysencouragesmetohaveanothertry.ShetellsmethatifIgiveitup,andmeanthatIhavefailed.What’smore,mybestfriendgivesmeshouldertoteachmeEnglish.Atlast,withherhelp,IbecomemoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandIammoreconfidentthanbefore.
Inaword,mybestfriendgivesmecourage.
94.Inatleast60words,writealettertothepersonyouwanttoexpressyourthanks.(以"
Athank-youletterto”为题,写一封不少于60个词的感谢信,标点符号不占格)
2020年是不平凡的一年,在这段特殊的日子里,你一定感受到了父母、老师、朋友或是一些陌生人给你带来的温暖和感动,请结合自己的经历,写一封信给他(他们),表达你的感激之情。
Thefollowingisforreferenceonly(以下表达仅供参考)
thank...for
bemovedby
provide...with
Athank-youlettertomydearfriend
Mydearfriend,
I’mwritingalettertoyoutoexpressmymostheartfeltgratitudeforwhatyouhavedoneonmybehalf.Perhapsitseemstobenobigdealbutaverysimplefavorinotherperson’sview,Idoappreciateitandbewillingtosay“thankyou”towardsyousincerelynevertheless.
Memoriesofthewinterholidaylastyearcamefloodingback.Thatwasmyfirsttimegoingbackhomebytrainsofarawayfromhome.What’sworse,arareterriblesnowdisasterattackedmyhometown.Therefore,whenIreachedtherailwaystationat5p.m,itwasalmostdarkandnobusavailable.Standinginthefreezingandchillystreet,Ifeltsohelplessandtearsfilledupwithmyeyes.ThenIcalledyouandyouaskedmetogotoyourdormitorywithoutasecondthought.Mydearfriend,didyouknowhowmovedIwaswhenIsawyouwithamufflerinyourhandforme?
Besides,youtookmyluggageandboughtmeabowlofnoodlesintherestaurant.
Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Itwasyouwhogavemeafavo