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提出质疑

详实论据

得出结论

B：

化苍白为哲理

哲理引入

具体阐释

孔子

老子

孟子

李子

马子

Idioms600.doc

C：

化平淡为修辞

Displayedbythiscartoonisasimpletruth:

…….However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?

Haven’tyoueverfound….?

Haven’tyouevernoticed….?

Why…?

Why…?

Aren'

tthey…….?

【第三段】

根据上文论调，进行对应评论

1.社会弊病（生态环境）

控制：

外控，内控

Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbeputintopracticeto….

Officialinterventionshouldbeactivatedtodirectthisproblemtoapositivesituation.

Finesorpenaltiesshouldbecastonthismattertoputanendtoit.

Mediasupervisionshouldbeputonthismattertoreducetheprevalenceof…..

Self-discipline

Self-restrict

Self-restrain

Self-control

Theabilityofself-disciplineshouldbecultivatedamongthosewho…..

Awarenessof….

Theawarenessof…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….

Rightattitude…

Rightattitudeto….shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho….

Socialconvention…

Anewsocialconventionconcerning…shouldbeestablishedamongthosewho……

Howcanweputtheproblemof…undercontrol?

Itoccurstomanythat…….Thatisaway,butapassiveone.Actually,wealsoneedto…,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthistrendtoanend.

Suchmisconductsof…mustbeputundercontrolimmediately!

Buthow?

Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicinvolve…,…,and…Theseproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?

Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat……..

2.社会风尚

支持

理由：

惠及自身与他人

惠及当下与未来

参与

Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asasocialwealth,thisvirtueof…maybedeliveredfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromgenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearole-modelin…...（Ascollegemen,wehavethedutytojoininthecampaignof……）

Ididnotdoitforyou.

IdidnotmarryyoubecauseIloveyou.

IdidnotcatchtheflightbecauseIgotupearly.

ImissedtheflightbecauseIgotuplate.

Escalate

Elevate

elevator

《狗镇》舞台剧

3.个人问题

求助：

expert,senior,friend,book,well-writtenworks

自助：

具体问题具体分析

Howcanwestepoutoftheshadowof…?

Onceuponatime,facingthesamesituation,Iwassuggestedbyfriendstoseekhelpformseniors,experts,orbooks.Thatwasaway,buthelpfromotherisnotnecessarilyavailableallthetime.Evenifitis,itisnotalwayssuitabletome.ThereforeIamdeterminedto…,to…,to…,andto….

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2350

1850

Exercise1

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

学生的对联

图片基调ironic

相关细节

Couplet

Thefirstline…

Thesecondline…

Thehorizontalscroll…

dishonest

Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirundesirableattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads,“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears,“intheirminds,successinexamsoutweighsdignity.”Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:

they,regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,aredeterminedtopasstestsbyanymeans.

大众观点诚信

提出质疑反问

详实论据考试作弊：

偷看，小抄，手势，手机，耳语…

得出结论

不再诚信，个人，教育，社会

Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…

Itisconventionallyholdthat…

Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat…

Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthepublicthat…..

Itiswidelysharedthatnoothergroupintheworldcanbeashonestascollegestudents.Butisthatatruthanymore?

Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromthepointofcollageexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseecandidatesdeliveringkeysbygesture,bywhispering,orevenbymobilephone.Evidently,amountingnumberofstudentsnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty.Thisdelinquencyexertsnegativeinfluenceeitherontheiroveralldevelopmentoronthequalityofeducation,nottomentiontheimpactonsocialatmosphere.

PreferAtoB

AispreferabletoB.

Intheirminds,AoutweighsB.

Exercise2

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

ThedreamofaBird

图片基调alarming

Abirdisholdingagun.

Heisstaringatthesky.

Heishidinginthebush.

Humanbeingsaresoaringinthesky.

Hewantstorevengeonhuman.

Whatpeopleoncedidwithhim.

Depictedbythecartoonisanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Obviously,helongsforadaywhenbecomesahunter,shootingpeopleforfun.Evidently,hisdreamderivesfrom/rootsin/isprovokedby/isevokedby/istriggeredby/issparkedbywhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.

【版本一】

Ithasbecomea“commonsense”thatnootherageplaceemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionsomuchastoday.Butdoeseveryofustakepartinthiscampaign?

Theanswerisratherdisappointing.Thefollowingmisdeedsordelinquencyarefamiliar.Itisnotsurprisingtoseesomeofushuntingwildlifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,orsellingthemforprofit.Meanwhile,itisnotuncommontofindsomefactoriesemmitingtoxicgaswithatmospherepolluted.Evidently,thesenseofachievingabetterenvironmentisnotsopervasiveasweexpect,whichmaybedetrimentaltoourwell-beingorlong-termdevelopment.

【版本二】

Asanesteemedthinkeronceput,“….”

Nevereasilyletgoofthetruth,“….”

Nevershrugoffthemotto,“….”

Nevereasilywaveasidethemotto,“”

Theintendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasamotto,“…”

Thecartoonistusestheuniquematphortoendowusthat…..

Thatis,….

Simplystateit,….

Inotherword,…..

Putitanotherway,….

Thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.

Whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.

【版本三】

itisourobligationtobeongoodtermwithournature.However,suchadoctrinehasbeenwavedasidebymostofus.Anycases?

Haven’tyoueverfoundsomeofushuntingwildlifewithspeciesendangered?

Haven’tyouevernoticedsomefactoriesover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?

Wherehastheirconsciencegone?

Wherehastheirsenseofsocialresponsibility?

Wherehastheirinsightofthefuturegone?

tthesevirtuesswallowedbygreediness,sacrificinglong-termbenefitsforinstantsatisfactionofeconomy?

Sacrifice…for….

Exhibitedbythiscartoonisamotto:

thenaturemaytreatusthewaywetreatit.Toputitanotherway,itmayrewardusfruitfullyonconditionthatweareongoodtermwithit,whilepunishusifwemistreatit.Inthepast,naturalresourceswereavailableanytimeandanywhereinthatpeopleneverwenttoofarinexploitingthem.Currently,thingshaschanged–ourgreedinesshasdeprivedusoftherightstoenjoythoseonceabundantresources.Thebirdinthepicture,byhisrevenge,intendtowarnusthathumansmaypayaheavypriceforwhattheydidwiththenature.

Deprivesb.of….

Beongoodtermwithit

Getonwellwithit.

Exercise3

Haveyoueverbeencaughtinadilemmaoradelicatesituation?

Ifso,youmayfeelthesamesorrowandpuzzleasthemandoesinthepicture.

Theman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatwhattroublesusisnotadversitiesthemselvesbutourindecisiveness.

Remindsb.sth.

Remindsb.that…

Exercise4

图片基调sarcastic

overall/excessive

sitting

explaining

excusinghimselffor…

Behonesttocustomers

Undertheridiculousappearanceofthecartoonliesasocialevilwhichmayexertheavypressureoneachconsumer.Inthedrawing,sittinginfrontofapatient,asurgeonisexplaining“outoftheconsiderationofyourhealth,Irenderyouanoverallmedicaltreatment.”Actually,heisexcusinghimselfforhisexcessiveremedy.Suchexcuseisnotrareinalmostanybusiness!

Toliveistolearn.

Asanesteemedscholaronceput,“Totakegoodcareofcustomersistocarehimselfforanybusinessorsocialagencies.”Inotherword,itisimpossibleforanyfirmtoflourishifitpaysnoattentiontotheinterestsofconsumers.However,asignificantnumberofagencies,likethedoctorinthepicture,letgoofthetruth.Letustakebanktransactionforexample.Inseveralbanks,agedpeoplearealwayspersuadedintopurchasingsomesubstandardmoneymanagementservices,resultingtofinancialloss.Evidently,suchbusinesses,iftheycontinuethesemisconducts,maybeabandonedbythegeneralpublic.

Persuadesb.intodoing….

Dissuadesb.fromdoing….

Imposeheavypressureon…

Exert…..on….

Exercise5

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingd