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2007年高考英语书面表达突破训练
PartA写作基本理论①对英语句子的认识
意义：
英语的句式与中文的不同。
我们在学习英语的时候要注意到这一点。
有的同学在学习中对此没有足够的认识，常常受中文的干扰。
在写作中表现出不能写出正确的句子。
I.什么是句子？
长的是句子，短的是词。
×
√无论字数多少，只要有主语和谓语（动词），而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一个句子。
Iamtired.
Pressingone’spalmtogetherandrestingone’sheadonthebackofone’shandwhileclosingtheeyesasifsleepingmeans“Iamtired.”（双手合拢，闭上眼，把头靠在手背上像睡觉的样子，意思是说“我累了。
”）
这两个句子都具备了主语和谓语。
都是完整的句子。
要记住：
在英语中，一个句子必须且只能有一个谓语。
1.省略主语的句子
Comein,please.（You）
Openthedoor.
Sitdown.
Standup.
Whataday!
（Whataterribledayitis!
）
2.一个句子不能同时有两个谓语。
典型错误：
1）Theoldmanlikestakeawalkinthevillageaftersupper.
∟
2）Ienjoytalkwithhimoveracupofcoffee.
∟
3）Theboyrantohismothercry.
∟
4）Afterwritethenotice,heputituponthewall.
∟
3.不要把从句的谓语当成句子的谓语,或把主句的谓语当成从句的谓语。
如果是一个复合句，主句和从句都应该分别有自己的主语和谓语。
典型错误：
1）1） Thosewhoeattoomuchwilleasilyill.
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2）Whenhewalkinginthepark,hefeltalittletired.
∟
3）WhenIatschool,Istudiedveryhard.
∟
II.Practice:
判断以下是否是句子。
1.Birdscanfly
2.ThebirdsinthecagewhichIboughtyesterday
3.Waitformeatthestation
4.Ifyouknowhowtoplaywithwordstomakepeoplelaugh
5.Awayofsaying“I’msorry”6.Pattingthestomachbeforeameal
7.Thebreadmymothermakesismuchbetterthanwhatyoucanbuyatthestore.
8.Tomakefriendsintheschoolwhichwasnotfarfrommynewhome
9.Ifyouwanttoknowwhatitfeelsliketofallthroughtheair,takeoffinarocket,flyahelicopterorfightaliencreaturesinouterspace
III.常见的句子结构
由于英语动词种类的不同，构成了不同的句子类型。
和中文不同的是，英语的动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。
表达同一个意思时，有的是及物动词，有的就是不及物动词。
如：
表示“听”这个意义时，listen是不及物动词；hear是及物动词。
表示“看”这个意义时，look是不及物动词，see,watch和notice就是及物动词。
表示“到达”，arrive是不及物动词，reach是及物动词。
不及物动词是不能接宾语的。
只能加上一个介词，才能接宾语。
如：
listento,lookat,arrivein等等。
1.主语+不及物动词
e.g. Hecamein.
TheairplanefromHongKongarrivedatfourp.m.
Onhisarrivalhewentstraighttothecounter.
Tocatchupwithothers,you’dbetterworkharder.
Howdidtheaccidentoccur?
InJuly,theshipsetoutforthePacific.
Australiahaschangedalotinthepastfortyyears.
Theylivedbyhuntinganimals,birdsandfish.
2.主语+系动词+表语
常见的系动词有：
be,seem,appear,become,go,get,grow,turn,
look,sound,feel,taste,smell
e.g. Sheisveryhappy.（×Sheveryhappy.）
Iamastudent.
Hebecamenervouswhenthinkingofstealing.
Itisimpossibletofindashopthatisopenafter5p.m.inthisarea.
Weareproudofourfriends.
Tobecomeatopgymnast,itisimportanttostartwhenveryyoung.
It’smuchcheapertocampthantostayinahotel.
Itisuselesstryingtoarguewithhim.
Igotcaughtinthetraffic.
Justthen,thetrafficlightturnedred.
Heseemedtohavemisunderstoodyou.
3.主语+及物动词+宾语
e.g.WelearnEnglishatschool.
HewonderedwhetherBillhadmanagedtoescape.
Ididn’tmeantobesorude.
Mostpeoplehereearntheirlivingbyfarming.
Wewillsendthesegoodstothefloodedarea.
Youmustkeepyourword.
Itooksomephotosofsomebeautifulactress.
IhopethatonedayIshallbeabletorepayyou.
被动：
Englishislearntatschool.
Thesegoodswillbesenttothefloodedarea.
4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语
有些动词需要接两个宾语。
间接宾语一般由人担任，直接宾语一般由物担任。
give,offer,teach,tell,read,ask,bring,pass,lend,return,write,throw,allow,send,cost
make,buy,do,get,save,cook,sing,find等。
e.g.Mybrothergavemeabook.
Whosentyouthecomputer?
MymotherwouldreadmeastorybeforeIwenttobed.
Iwon’ttellyouanythingaboutit.
CanyousingusanEnglishsong?
Passmethenewspaper,please.
这样的句子变为被动时可根据需要，将任何一个宾语作为句子的主语。
e.g.Iwasgivenabook.
Abookwasgiventome.
5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补
e.g.Unfortunatelytheyfinditdifficulttorepaythismoney.
ThegrowthinpopulationmadeNewYorkthelargestcityintheUSA.
Doyouthinkitpossibletofinishitinoneday?
Wearemakingourcountrymoreandmorebeautiful.
【模拟试题】
改错练习：
1.Pleasespeakloudersothateverybodycanlistenyou.
2.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinmyhometown.
3.Listen!
Someoneknockingatthedoor.
4.Hetoldmedon’tcallhimbefore9o’clock.
5.Doesyourparentsallowyoumakeyourowndecision?
6.AlthoughitisonlyAugust,buttheweatherisgettingworsedaily.
7.Becausetheprofessorhadfallenill,sohewasnotabletobepresentattheconference.
8.InJapan,apersonseesthe“OK”gesturemaythinkitmeansmoney.
9.WhenIpasthisroom,IheardhimsinginganEnglishsong.
PartB写作必备素材①叙事类
外出活动、欣赏美景（日记）
ØWedecidedtogooutforapicnic.
ØIhadapleasantoutingwithsomeofmyclassmatestoday.
ØEarlyinthemorning,wesetoffforthefarmforavisit.
ØWhenwereachedthefarm,weweregivenawarmwelcome.
ØTheyshowedusaroundthefarm（Wewereshownaroundthefarm）,wherewesawmanykindsofplants.
ØWecaughtsightofastreamwithgreengrassandbeautifulflowersonbothsides.
ØWewerecompletelyamazedatthewonderandthegreatnessofnature.（我们完全被大自然的奇妙和伟大折服了）
ØWejumpedandshoutedlikeinnocent（天真的）children.
ØOnceonthetopofthehill/Themomentwegottothetopofthehill,weweredeeplystruck/attractedbythebeautifulscenery.
ØHowweenjoyedthebeautifulviewsfromthetop!
ØAfterbeingdividedintogroups,wesettoworkatonce.
ØSomeofusweregettingwater,some（were）cuttingthemeatandvegetables,andothers（were）sittingonthegrassenjoyingmusic.
ØBirdsweresingingsweetlyinthetreesandbutterfliesweredancinggracefullyinthegarden/fields.
ØWhenlunchtimecame,wesatonthegrassland,eatinganddrinkinghappily.
ØThemealwassodeliciousthatweenjoyeditverymuch.
ØWesanganddancedtogethertothemusic.
ØThreehourshadpassedbeforeweknewit.
ØThetimepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.
ØItwastimeforustogobackwhenthesunstartedtogodown.
ØIspentthewholeafternoonwithourcousins,enjoyingthefinesceneryandfreshairinthecountry.
ØAtaboutfouro’clockintheafternoon,wesaidgoodbyetothem
ØAtfouro’clockintheafternoonwehadtoreturn.
ØTheycameouttoseeusuntilwedisappearedinthedistance.
ØOnthewayback,wewerelaughingandtalkingallthetime.
ØWhatawonderfulweekendwehad!
ØWeenjoyedourselvesverymuch.
ØThroughtheseout-ofclassactivitieswecanlearnalotofthingsthatcan’tbelearnedinclass.
ØAlthoughweweretired,wefeltveryhappy.Ithinkit’sourdutytocoverourcountrywithgreen.
②．近年来高考英语书面表达中的复杂高级句
1.Wecanpayavisittothemuseum,studycomputerandpaintingandmanyotherthings.
2.WecanwatchnewsprogramsonTV,readbooksornewspapersintheevening.
3.Iusedtoattendclassesatschoolanddealwithourhomeworkinthedaytime.
4.Iusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclasses.
5.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.
6.Thenextmomentthecarhitthemanwhilehewascrossingtheroad.
7.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.
8.Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.
9.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesorstories.
10.Thentheheadofthefarmshowedusaroundthefarm.
11.TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.
12.Mybrotherwasridingwithmesittingontheseatbehind.
13.Hopeyoudon’thavetowaitaslongaswedid.
14.IstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990.
15.ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.
16.LastyearIwonfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.
17.Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.Afterwalkingforawhileyou’llcometoahill.Walkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thenyou’llseealake.
18.Ihaveanannouncementtomake.
19.ThestudentsunionisgoingtoholdapartyonSaturdayevening,August15,towelcomeourfriendsfromtheUnitedStates.
20.Remembertowrapupthesmallgift,signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgood
wishes.
21.Therewillbemusic,dancing,singing,gamesandexchangeofgift.
22.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.
23.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver.
24.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister.
25.AteighthebecameamemberofthedivingteaminGuangdongProvince.
26.Hestudiedhardatschoolandtrainedhardforfiveyearsbeforehecametothenationalteam.
27.Itwasprettyhardonthechildrenofthevillagewhohadtogotoschoolinothervillageswhichwereallfaraway.
28.Theteachershadfinishedmiddleschooleducationbeforetheyreturnedtoteachhere.
29.Thepupilsaredividedintofivedifferentclasses,inwhichsixsubjectsaretaught.
30.Educationisfreeforallchildreninthevillage.
31.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.
32.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.
33.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.
34.40%ofthestudentsthinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopay
gardenersandworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.
35.Theysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow.
PartC2007年高考写作基本功训练（词组部分）
1.给某人让座 2.跳到地上/桌上 3.下了一整天雨
4.听到呼救声 5.把…带到安全地带 6.向某人道歉
7.给某人提建议 8.得到好的治疗 9.接受某人的建议
10.加入球队/俱乐部/小组/委员会/公司 11.向某人解释…
12.治愈某人的病 13.匆忙赶往医院/学校/邮局/派出所/火车站/汽车站/飞机场
14.提出付100元钱
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