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读后续写TheClimb

试题呈现：

Iwasterrifiedofheights.Ofcourse,itwasnotreallyafearofbeinginahighplace.Rather,itwastheviewofalongwaytofall,ofrocksfarbelowmeandnofirmwallbetweenmeandtheedge.Mysenseofsecuritywasscreaminglyabsent.Icouldrelyonlyonmyownsure-footedness.

Despitemyfear,twosummersagoIsomehowfoundmyselfclimbingtoahighplace,whilequakinginsideandout.MostofourhighschoolhadcomealongonadaytriptotheBoquerÒn,abeautifulandpleasantspotinthefoothillsofPeru.Itschiefattractionisthemainwaterfall,about100feethigh,that thundersintoacrystalclearpoolfeedingtheAguaytiaRiver.Allaroundthepoolandondowntotherushing riverare rockslargeandsmall.The beachisstrewn（布满） withrocks.Onbothsidesofthefall,thejunglestretchestomeetit,risingparalleltoitona gentlerslope.

Aftereatingourlunches,manyof uswantedtomaketheclimbtoanareaaboveit.Weknewothershaddonesoonprevioustrips.Afewguyswentfirsttomakesuretheywereontherightpath.Butaftertheyleft,mygroupofsevendecidedtogoaheadwithoutwaitingforthemtoreturn.Isuspectedweweregoingthewrongway,butIkeptsilent,figuringthattheothersknewbetter.Wewentalongthebaseofthehilluntilwereachedtheclimb.It stoppedmeinmytracks.

Theclimbrosesteeplyaboveus.Alongtherightedge,thejungle hugged therocks; passagethroughitstreesseemedunlikelytobeachieved.Themajorityofmyviewwasfilledwithrocks.Peeringbackdowntowardtheriver, Isawasteepslopeofrocksallthewaytothewater.AllIcouldthinkaboutwashowfaritwouldbetofall.

注意：

1.续写词数应为 150 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!

Myfriendskeptrightonclimbingbuttheydidnotforgetme.

参考范文：

 Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!

 MyanxietyincreasedasIwatchedthem. “DoIturnback?

” Mywholebeingshouted, “Yes!

” “WillIregretitlater?

Ireallywanttogettothetop,but...” Ivoicedmyuncertaintiestomyfriends.They dismissedmyfears andencouragedmetostickitout.Questioningmyownability,Idecidedatleasttoattempttheclimb.Ichoseapaththatseemedeasiestwithmyfriendsaheadofme.Whenthe “path” leduptoanextremelynarrowarea,thedifficultiesincreased,withscaryspotsoneafteranother.Mybreathingspedup,andmyheartpoundedevenfaster,growingloudinmyears.

Myfriendskeptrightonclimbingbuttheydidnotforgetme.Someonewasalwaysbehindmetohelpholdmyfeetsteadywhennecessary,whilesomeoneelsewasaheadtoofferahandup.Itrustedthemmorethanmyself.Withfriendssupportingmebywordsandactions,Islowly gainedground.Finallywecametothetoughestplace.OnceagainIshrankwhenIpeeredbackatthesteepslopeofrocks.“Youcanmakeit!

Wewon’tletyoufall.” Myfriends’ assurancesgavemethestrengthtogoon.Whenmyfeetmadecontactwiththesolidrockonthetop,Iheavedahugesighofrelief.Icouldfeelallthefeardrainingoutofme.Ineverfeltsoalive,andsothankfulformyfriendsandthatlife.

下水作文：

  Mytensethoughtswereinterruptedbytherealizationthatmyfriendswerealreadybeginningtoclimb!

 Thethoughtofthesteepslope,thetree-linedpassagemadeeverycellofmybodytremblewithfear.Evenatthismoment,Istillwantedtogiveuphalfway,lettingthefearofheightdominateme.However,thespectacularsceneryabovethewaterfallkeptmespellbound,tellingmenottorobmyselfoftheopportunitytoadmireits splendor.Afewfeetahead,myfriendswerewaitingforme,encouragingmetopresson.Myfinaldecisionmade,Itookthefirstcautiousstepforwardandstartedmyfirstfearfulclimb.Stepbystep,Ifollowedmyfriendsclosely.ThehigherIclimbed,themorescaredIbecame.ButIknewtherewasnowaythatIcouldturnback!

  Myfriendskeptrightonclimbingbuttheydidnotforgetme.Onestayedbehindmetosteadymyfeetandonestayingaheadofferedmeapull-upwhereitwasextremelysteep.Todistractmyfromtheattentionontheclimbing,theysharedinterestingstoriesalltheway,whichworkedquitefine.Thefunonthewayreallyrelievedmytensionalotandwiththehelpandencouragementofmyfriends,Ifinallymadeittotheareaabovethewaterfall,thoughcoveredinsweat.Standingattheedgeofthewaterfall,seeingthewaterfallthunderingitswaydownintothepoolandfeelingthegentlewindbrushingagainstmyface,Ifelttheclimbreallyworthwhile,thoughquitescary.

续写：

好胜狗狗赛跑中途退赛竟是为何？

续写题目

WhenIadoptedhim,hehadbeenrescuedfromdeathinsideatightlytiedblacktrashbagabandonedrightbesideagarbagetruckontheroad.Analertgarbagemannoticedthebagmovingandusedametalrake（耙子）totearopenthebagtolookinside.Therewasmyshakingpuppydog.Therakedamagedthenervesinhisbacksohelimpedalittlebuthecouldrunasfastaslightning.

Formydog’sfirstbirthday,IenteredhiminafunrunsponsoredbyourlocalSocietyforthePreventionofCrueltytoAnimals（SPCA）.I’mnotmuchofarunner,buttherunwasonly3kilometers,soIthoughtitwouldbefunforbothofus.

Wepracticedforweeks.Onourpracticerunshewasalwayseagertogoandusuallydraggedmealongbehindhim.Iworkedonhisleash（拴狗链）mannerssothathewouldn’ttripmeonthebigday.Ifeltwewerereadyforanything.

Thefunrunwasdowntownamongthebigbuildings,sothenoiseofbarkingdogsallaroundusrosetoadeafeningpitchatthestartoftherace.Mydogwasfrightenedwhenthestartingtonewentoff.Hehadtroublerunningintherightdirectionwithalltheconfusionaroundus.Soontherunnersbegantothinout,andmydogwasrunningstraightandfast.Wewerepassingpeopleandmakinggreattime.Iwasdreamingofagold-medalfinish.

However,whenweweresixblocksfromthefinishmydogsuddenlystoppedanddroppedtothegroundlikeasackofpotatoes.IalmostdislocatedmyshoulderfromthesuddenstopasIwaspulledbackwardbytheleash.

Hewaslyingflatonhisbellywithhisheaddowninthemiddleofthecrossroads.AtfirstIthoughtsomethingbadhadhappenedtohim.Hewasshakingandsobbing.Ididaquickcheckandcouldn’tseeanythingwrong.Itriedtogethimup,butherefused.Thepoliceofficerdoingtrafficcontrolimpatientlysignedmetomoveawaysohecouldreleasethecars.注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.

Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer–amovinggarbagetruck.

参考范文

ButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup. TheharderItriedtoscoophimupfromthepavement,themorehefoughtme.Theofficeryellingandcarshonking,Ipulledhimwithallmymight,butinvain.Finally,Igotmyarmunderhimandliftedhimupinafireman’scarry,throwinghimovermyshoulder.AsIstaggeredtotheroadside, peoplearoundweretakingmydog’sside,laughingIwasrunninghimtoohard.Iwasfuming.Mydogwouldrunalldaylongandhewasn’ttheleastbittired. （89w）

Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck. Itssoundmusthavehitmydog’ssensitiveears,sohecriedlouderandclawedatmybackaswedrewclosertoit.IheldontighterandranasfastasIcouldtogetmysweetbabydogawayfromthatscarygarbagetruck.IranwithhimonmyshoulderuntilIfelthimrelaxed,andthenIsethimdown.Hewaggedhistailingratitudeforsavinghimfromthegarbagetruck.Surely,wedidn’twinanymedals,butIwonhistrustforever. （94w）