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托福写作范文:
Whiletheproponentsoftheplantobuildalargeshoppingcenterinmycommunitybelievethatitwillaideconomicdevelopment,Ithinkthatitwillpossiblydoirreparableharmtoourneighborhood.Theproposedshoppingcenterwilldamageexistingbusinesses,provideinferiorproducts,anddestroytheenvironmentofourpeacefulcommunity.
Researchindicatesthatcompanieswithlessthan50workersemploymorepeopleandgeneratemorerevenueasapercentageofanation'
sGDPthanlarge-scalecorporations.ThisistrueinAmerica,wheresmallbusinessesareconsideredtheengineoftheeconomy,asitisinourcommunitywheremanypeopleownandoperatesmallshops.Largestorescanbuylargequantitiesofgoodsatwholesaleprices.Whilelocalgrocery,thatcannotbuyproductsinbulk,willbeunabletocompete.Oncethecompetitionisgone,thelargestorecanraiseitspricesandloweritsemployee'
swages.Thisclassicexampleofexploitativemonopolycapitalismimpoverishesacommunitywhileenrichingasmallnumberofpeople.
Thegoodssoldattheshoppingcenterwouldbemassproducedandnecessarilyofinferiorqualitytothehandcraftedlocalgoodsandfreshlygrownlocalproduce.Cheapproductslikeplasticfurniturewouldlackthecharacterandlocalflavoroftraditionalwoodenfurnituremaderighthereinourtown.Cheaplymass-producedfood,ladenwithpesticidesandchemicalpreservatives,wouldcrowdoutthehealthier,fresher,andtastierlocalproduceontheshelvesofthelargeshoppingcenter.Lowpricesfromthelargestoremighttemptlocalconsumerstoeatlesshealthyfood,endangeringthehealthoflocalpeopleaswellasharmingtheincomesoflocalfarmersandshopkeepers.
Lastly,Imustpointoutthatalargeshoppingcentermightbringunwelcomedevelopmenttooursmallcommunity.Uglyandnoisyroadsandparkinglotswouldneedtobeconstructed.Thevolumeofpeoplewantingtobuythingsatthenewshoppingcenterwouldworsenthetrafficsituation,whichisalreadybad.Pollutionfromcarsandtrucksalreadyhasanotablydegradingeffectonthelocalair-qualityandthisisalsoboundtobecomeworseasthetraffictoandfromtheshoppingcenterincreases.
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Theuseofdevicesthatcanbeconnectedtotheinternet,likecomputers,phonesandipads,shouldbeprohibitedfromtheclassroom.
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IdisagreewiththestatementthattheuseofdevicesthatcanbeconnectedtotheinternetshouldbeprohibitedfromtheclassroombecauseIthinkthatunderthecorrectcircumstances,theycanbevaluablelearningtools.
Iwouldliketoqualifymystancebysayingthattherearecertaintimeswhendeviceswithinternetaccessshouldnotbeused,andthatitisperfectlyreasonableforateachertosetlimits.Forexample,studentsneedtorespecttheirteacherandshouldnotbesearchingforinformationortextingfriendsduringlectures.Thisisjustanextensionofbasicetiquettesuchasnottalkingwhilesomeoneelseis.Anothertimewhenaccesstodevicesmightbelimitedisduringtestswhenthestudentisexpectedtorecallanswersorsolveproblemswithouttheassistanceoftheinternet.
Takingsuchrestrictionsintoconsideration,Ifeelthatotherwisedeviceswithinternetaccesscanenrichtheclassroomexperience.First,theycanallowforawidervarietyofprogrammingtoappealtomorestudents.Ratherthanjustlisteningtolectures,studentscantryeducationalgames,communicatewithstudentsinotherstatesorcountries,orotheractivitiesthatengageratherthanborethem.Teacherscandeveloppracticalactivitiesandlessonsthatintegratethemesandmediathatthestudentsareinterestedin.Ifstudentsareinterested,theendresultwillbeabettergraspofthesubjectandretentionofthedetails.
Furthermore,deviceswithinternetaccessarenowanintegralpartofmodernsociety,solearningtousethemeffectivelyisessential.Therefore,ifsuchdevicesareallowedintheclassroom,theteachercandemonstratehowtheycanbeusedproperlyandeffectively.Forinstance,astudentmayalreadyknowhowtodoasearchforinformation,butateachercanofferwaystoimprovetheefficiencyofasearch.Moreover,ateachercanemphasizewhysomesourcesareconsideredvalidwhereasothersourcesshouldnotbeused.Inotherwords,studentscangainmoreinsightintothecapabilitiesofinternet-accessdevicesandthevalueofinformationpostedontheinternet.
Sincedevicesthathaveinternetaccessarebecomingubiquitous,studentsneedtolearnhowtousethemeffectively.Thedevicesalsocanengagestudentstomakelearningmorefunorinteresting,sotheyrememberthematerialbetter.Therefore,Ithinkthatwithcertainexceptionssuchasduringlectures,internet-accessdevicesshouldbeallowedintheclassroom.
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Studentsshouldlearnsubjectsthatwillbeusefulinafuturejob,includingmath,science,technology,andengineering,eveniftheyareinterestedinothersubjects.
Istronglyagreewiththestatementthatstudentsshouldlearnsubjectsthatwillbeusefulinafuturejob,includingmath,science,technology,andengineering,eveniftheyareinterestedinothersubjects.
Foremost,math,science,technology,andengineeringpreparestudentswiththebasicskillsneedednotonlyforajob,butforlifeingeneral.Thosesubjectsarefoundationalforlearningtosolvepractical,everydayproblems.Forexample,mathisneededtocreateaworkingbudgetforahousehold’sincomeandexpenses.Aknowledgeofengineeringcanhelpapersondosimplerepairsonahomeratherthancallinahandymanandpaysignificantlymoretohavethejobcompleted.Therefore,studentsshouldlearnthesubjectstohelpwithsituationsthatariseinthefuture,eveniftheydonotfeelthatthesubjectsareapplicablefortheirintendedjobs.
Inaddition,itisimpossibletoknowwhatthefuturewillbring.Evenifastudentisnotnowinterestedinacareerthatheavilyreliesoncertainsubjects,heorshemayendupinsuchacareerinthefuture.Jobdescriptionschange,andpeoplechangejobs.Bylearningfoundationalsubjects,studentsarebetterpreparedtodealwithchangesintheirworkingenvironmentandaremoremarketableasemployees.Ifastudentdoesnothavecertainbasicskills,itgreatlylimitswhatthestudentisabletodointhefuture.Anemployerwouldprefertoseeatleastanintroductorylevelofmath,science,technology,andengineeringthattheemployeecanbuilduponratherthanhireapersonwithnoexposuretosuchskillsatall.
Furthermore,ifastudenthasnointerestinfoundationalsubjects,thenthestudentislesslikelytohavecasualexperiencesusingthesubjectsoutsideoftheclassroom.Astudentwhoisinterestedintechnology,forexample,islikelytohaveahobbysuchascomputerprogramming,andsuchahobbycontributestothedevelopmentofadeepunderstandingofthesubject.Thatstudentcanapplythingslearnedfromthehobbytocompletetasksinafuturejob.Ontheotherhand,astudentwithnointerestintechnologyisataseriousdisadvantagebecauseheorshedoesnothaveanyexperiencetodrawuponatall.
Therefore,Ithinkitisimportantforallstudentstotakeclassesrelatedtothesciences,math,technology,andengineering.Thatway,thestudentsarebetterequippedtotakeonanyjobandtosolveproblemsineverydaylife.
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ataseriousdisadvantage处于非常不利的地位
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Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement.Thebestwayforateachertohelpstudentsbecomeinterestedinasubjectistoexplainthatsubjectwillhelpthemoutsideschool.
Idonotagreewiththestatementthatit’sthebestwayforteacherstohelpstudentsbecomemoreinterestedinasubjectbyexplaininghowthissubjectcanhelpstudentslivebetteroutsideoftheschool.Instead,Ithinkitisbesttoengagestudentsbygivingpracticaldemonstrationsthatmakethestudentswanttolearnmore.
Idoagreethatstudentswillbemoreinclinedtobecomeinterestedinasubjectiftheyknowthatitishelpfuloutsideofschool.Forexample,IhadnointerestingeometryuntilItriedmakingmyfirstquilt,ThenIrealizedhowpracticalgeometrywasforcalculatingmeasurementsoftheblocksandtheamountoffabricthatIneededtobuy.OnceIlearnedhowusefulthesubjectcouldbe,Iwasmuchmoreinvolvedinmathclassatschool.However,Idonotthinkthatjusttellingastudentthatasubjectishelpfulwillwork.Inmycase,IwouldnothavebeeninterestedatallingeometryiftheteacheronlysaidthatIcoulduseitforquilting.Instead,Ineededtosolvearealprobleminmyownlife.
Infact,justtellingastudentsomethingmaybeverycounterproductivebecauseitmaysoundliketheteacherispreaching.Studentscouldbecomelessinterestediftheythinkthattheteacherispatronizingthem.Evenaverygoodspeakerisnotaspersuasiveassomeonewhousesmultiplemeansofcommuni