考研英语写作 何凯文版.docx

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考研英语写作

三段论：

第一段---描述图画或图表

第二段---解释寓意

第三段---给出评论

第一段：

第一句

1、Asisshownabove,描述图画（倒装）.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。

描述图画注意：

第一步：

寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。

第二部：

描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。

第三部;寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。

模式：

在图画中央有------（倒装），它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）

第二句----总结

1Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。

2Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。

第二段

第一句----观点的提出

（1）Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主题.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.

（2）Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题.（或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.）Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost.在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。

（或Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous.）

万能观点：

1图画主题的重要性

Nothingcanbecomparedwith···

···isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable···

···remainstobeanintegralpartin···

2图画主题的有害性

Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.

···isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.

···inlargemeasuredetrimental.

第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视）

（1）Thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题.

（2）Thepublicattachdueattentionto重要主题.

givepriorityto···优先考虑···

attachattentionto···对··注意

emphasizetheimportanceof···强调···的重要性

stressthefundamentalroleof···强调···的根本作用

第三句---对主题进行展开（3-4句）

Bydoingso,十一个角度平行展开···（也可用科学论据法或举例法）

（一）、十一个万能理由（角度）

物质回报：

1主题canprovide（offer）peoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.

2Theindustriousandinsightfulpeoplewillneverfailtoprofitsfrom（benefitfrom）doing主题.

时间角度

节约时间

1Itcanmakethemostofone’stime,chanceandtechnology.

2主题.Learningmorewesternculture）,occupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom/wonderingandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon.

浪费时间

Asallknown,thedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idledawayandtimeshouldbecherished,but（主题.starworship）wasteshours,lavishesdaysandevensquandersyears,whichleadsustosaykillsanevenmurdersyoungster’sprimetime.

效率角度

1主题（e.g.Starworship/AddictiontotheInternet）makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades/lowefficiency/underachievement.

2One’senergygraduallywearsoffandone’sthought,creativethinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing主题.

方便和快捷

1主题（.WideWorldWeb）providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.

2主题（.MSNandotherinstantmessengers）canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.

安全角度

1主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.

2主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.

身心健康

①（主题）canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.

②Bydoing（主题）peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.

③（主题）canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone’sknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.

生活娱乐

1It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone’spressure,boredom,stressandburden.

表“受益”的词组：

Broadenone’smind

Enrichone’sexperience

Enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’swork

2Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.

3Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.

有助成长和成功（自己和他人）

1Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.

2Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.

3Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.

4Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.

5Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers.

6Itdose/doesn’tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,self—worth,self—relianceanddignity.

文化价值观

1Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.

2Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.

环境保护

1Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosionordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.

2Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.

社会宏观角度

1Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economicrecession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate.

2Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.

3Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.

4Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducation,employments,self—realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth.

（二）、科学论据法

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience（CAS），···

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScience（CASS）,···

ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions–asurgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.

（三）、举例子

①Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof···,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。

②Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto···thatIhavehoard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis···在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是···

第四句（结尾句——虚拟语气和利弊句）

虚拟语气：

（1）积极的主题

如果没有···，我们可能根本做不了···

Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.

（2）消极的主题

如果情况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。

Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.

.Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus.

利弊句：

（1）弊大于利

Thedisadvantagesovershadowthebenefits.

Thebenefitsareinlargemeasurecanceledoutbytheproblems.

（2）利大于弊

Theproblemsseemtobepalecomparedwiththebenefits.

Thedisadvantagescannotweighedagainstthebenefits.

第三段

好的现象

Itisimperativethattheessencebeabsorbedandthedrawbacksbeneglected,duringthisprocess,especiallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosion,whenthenews,facts,opinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld.

坏的现象

Withaproperlowandanalertpublicitwillonlybeamatteroftimebeforetheproblembecomesthingsofthepast.伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。

Onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.只有在一个理性，繁荣和健康的环境中，我们才有希望看到这样一个理想的景象，人们能最大可能的去享受他们的生活。