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高中英语写作模拟训练题20题含参考答案
高中英语写作模拟训练题20题(含参考答案)
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一、读后续写
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Thee-mailrequestcameintoEkibenrestaurantlateonaThursdayafternooninMarch.BrandonJones,themanwhosentthee-maildidn'tactuallywantthefoodhimelf.Hewaswritingonbehalfofhismother-in-law,Shirley,wholovedthebroccoli(西兰花)dishwithfreshherbsandcucumbervinegar.HewentontoexplainthatshewasnowinthefinalstageoflungcanceratherhomeinVermontandthathewashopingtogettherecipe(烹饪法)tomakeitforherthere.SteveChu,oneoftherestaurant'sco-owners,readthee-mailandquicklyreplied,"Thanksforreachingout,"hewrote."We'dliketomeetyouinVermontandmakeitfreshforyou."
Brandonwasshocked."Iemailedback,saying,'YoudoknowthatthisisVermontwe'retalkingabout,right?
'"saysBrandon."ButChuresponded,'Noproblem.Youtellusthedate,timeandlocationandwe'llbethere."
Forthepastsixyears,everytimeShirleyvisitedBaltimore,thefirstplaceshewantedtogowasEkibensoshecouldorderthatdish."Shelovesthatbroccoli,andIreallywantedhertohaveitonemoretime,"Brandonsays.
"Shehadalwaystoldus,'WhenI'monmydeathbed,Iwanttohavethatbroccoli,'"recallsBrandon'swife,RinaJones.ThatFridayafterwork,adayafterreceivingBrandon'se-mail,ChuloadedhistruckwithahotplateandacoolerandthenheadedforVermontwithhisbusinesspartner,EphremAbebe,andanemployee.TheystayedovernightinatentanddrovethenextdaytothesmalltownwhereShirleylived.
AssoonasChuandhisteampulledintotheparkinglot,theygottowork.Theypulleddownthegateofthepickup,fixedthehotplateonthetruck'spowerport,andstartedcookinganddeep-frying.Inadditiontobroccoli,theymadetofuwithpeanutsauceandfreshherbsandsomesteamedrice.Afterneatlyboxingeverythingup,theyknockedontheircustomer'sdoor.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
"Goaheadandanswer,"Rinatoldhermother.
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TheJonesesinvitedChuandhisteamtojointhemfordinner.
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【答案】PossibleVersion
"Goaheadandanswer,"Rinatoldhermother.NosoonerhadShirleyopenedthedoorthanshewasattractedbythefamiliarsmell.Withhermouthwidelyopen,sherecognizedChuandhiscoworkersimmediatelyandkeptsaying,"Ican'tbelievethatyoudroveallthewayupheretocookforme!
"Sohappyandtouchedwasshethatshecouldn'tcontainherself.AsforChu,hewasgladtoseehisloyalcustomer.
TheJonesesinvitedChuandhisteamtojointhemfordinner.Theythankedthembutsaidtheyneededtogetback.Chualsorefusedtotakeanymoneyfromthefamily."Itwasanhonortohelpfulfillthefamily'swishes,"Chusaid.Rinawashappythathermotherwasabletoenjoyherbelovedbroccoliwithremarkablekindnessonelasttime.Onseeinghermothercryingabouttheirgenerosity,Rinaburstintotearsaswellandsaid,"I'llcarrythatpositivememorywithmeforever."
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,主要描述巴尔的摩(Baltimore,巴尔的摩市,也译作巴的摩尔市,美国马里兰州最大城市,美国大西洋沿岸重要海港城市)Ekiben饭店收到了一封来自于BrandonJones的邮件,他说他的岳母Shirley,已经到肺癌晚期了,但是很想吃Ekiben饭店的一道菜——配有新鲜蔬菜和黄瓜醋的西兰花。
于是,Ekiben饭店的的合伙人之一SteveChu带着设备,跟合伙人EphremAbebe和一个员工就去了佛蒙特州(Vermont,美国东北部新英格兰地区一州),为Shirley做了她想吃的西兰花和其它几样菜品,然后敲开了她的家门。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“去开门。
”可知,第一段可描写Shirley打开门后看到SteveChu他们时的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“Joneses一家人邀请Chu和他的团队跟他们一起吃晚饭。
”可知,第二段可描写他们邀请一起吃晚饭之后的场景。
2.续写线索:
Shirley开门——看到熟悉的饭菜和Chu——很激动——邀请一起吃晚饭——Chu他们拒绝——Shirley一家人很感谢Chu他们
3.词汇激活
行为类
①辨认出:
recognized/pickout
②实现梦想:
fulfillone'swishes/realizeone’sdream
情绪类
①高兴:
happy/glad
②感动:
touched/moved
【点睛】
【高分句型1】NosoonerhadShirleyopenedthedoorthanshewasattractedbythefamiliarsmell.(由Nosooner…than…引导的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型2】Ican'tbelievethatyoudroveallthewayupheretocookforme!
"(由that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】Sohappyandtouchedwasshethatshecouldn'tcontainherself.(由so…that…引导的部分倒装结构)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
WouldYouLikeaCupofTea?
TheyearwhenIturned30,myfriendErinandIhikedpartofNewfoundland'sEastCoastTrail-215kilometersbetweenCappahaydenandSt.John's.Therewasonetake-homeIdidn'texpect:
proofofthesurprisingkindnessofstrangers.
Asashywomangrowingupinthedangerofstrangers,I'mnotonetoopenuptoanyoneIdon'tknow.Butonthathike,Ilearnednewwaystomanage.
Overourfirsttwodays,wecoveredlessthan30kilometers,mostlyintherain.Thentherainchangedintoadownpour.Nothingdriedovernightandeverythingwaswetthrough.Thetrailswererugged,withdeepmuddypuddles.Westruggledwitheverystep.
Asweemergedfromonetrail,lookinglikecatsintherain,awomanandherparentscaughtsightofusandtookpity."Wouldyouliketocomeinforacupoftea?
"thewomanasked.Abriefbreakfromtheweather,awarmtea,chairstositon—itwasalltoogoodtopassup.Wehurriedtotheircottage,andthenlearnedmoreaboutourhostess—Jenny.Teaturnedintoanofferofashower;thehotshowerturnedintoanofferofahotmeal.Afterthemeal,ourbootsandclothesweredriedoutovertheoven.Wesatoncouches,listeningtotheradio,lookingthroughmagazinesandtalkingcasuallyandhappily.
Therainstopped.Wewavedareluctantgoodbyeandcontinuedtheresthillyroadwithnewenergy.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Backathome,ItelephonedandtoldJennywe'dmadeit.
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Iknewthatthetripwouldchangeme.
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【答案】Backathome,ItelephonedandtoldJennywe'dmadeit.Isaid:
"Thankyouforputusupinyourhome.Itwassokindofyoutoprovideuswithshelterandfood.PleasegivemeyouraddressandIwillsendyouagifttoyouinreturnforyourgeneroushelp."Jennysaid:
"Hearingthis,Ifeelrelieved.Afteryouleft,Iwasworriedaboutyou.Butyoudon'tneedtosendmeanything.Maybeyoucanvisitnexttimeasafriend".
Iknewthatthetripwouldchangeme.BeforeImetJenny,Ididn'tbelieveinstrangers,who,inmyopinion,willdomoreharmthangood.Butnow,Ithinkstrangerscanalsobekind.Welivetogetherinthisworld.Ifeveryonetreatseachotherasastrangeranddoesn'tbelieveineachother,everyonewillbeisolated.Isolatingoneselfwillmakeeveryoneextremelylonely.Ifwecanreachouttoothers,wecanchangestrangersintofriends.Andtheworldwillbeharmonious.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和朋友去爬山,路遇大雨,一个陌生的女士Jenny好心地收留她们在家里留宿一晚,第二天雨停了,她们不舍地告别,继续前进。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“回到家,我打电话告诉珍妮我们到达了。
”可知,第一段可描写作者和Jenny的对话。
②由第二段首句内容“我知道这次旅行会改变我。
”可知,第二段可描写作者对待陌生人的态度的改变。
2.续写线索:
感谢——谢绝礼物——交朋友——想法改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①感谢:
thank/begrateful
②不需要做:
don'tneedtodo/notnecessarytodo
③拜访:
visit/payavisit
④主动和人交往:
reachouttosb./associatewithsb.willingly
情绪类
①感到宽慰的:
relieved/comforted
②担心的:
worried/anxious
【点睛】
[高分句型1]BeforeImetJenny,Ididn'tbelieveinstrangers,who,inmyopinion,willdomoreharmthangood.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Ifeveryonetreatseachotherasastrangeranddoesn'tbelieveineachother,everyonewillbeisolated.(由连接词if引导的条件状语从句)
3.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事
Inthefarmers'market,thereweremanyotherstalls(摊位)withallkindsoffoodforsaleaswellascolourfulrowsoffruitandvegetablessetoutontables.Cookedfoodstallsfilledtheairwiththewonderfulsmellsofhottastysnacks,andthesmelloffreshcoffeewaseverywhere.
"Wow,"Guscriedout,"Jam(果酱)!
"
Justinfrontofhim,therewasajamstallthatsoldallkindsofhome-madejam.ButtheonlykindGuswantedwasstrawberry,soheboughtajar.Hecouldn'thelpbuttastethejamimmediately.ItwasOK,hefrowned(皱眉)andshookhishead,butneverasgoodasRose's,whosejamwasjustmagic.
Rosewashisneighbour,anelderlyladywholivedalonebutlikedcompanynowandagain.HerdoorbellwasusuallytooquietbeforeGusandhismommovedtothevillageafterhisfather'sdeath.Gusoftenrangherdoorbellandaskedwhethersheneededanythingfromthesupermarketasheandhismotherweregoingtotown.Inreturn,RosewouldoftengiveGusajarofjam.Guswasamazedhowjamcouldbesodelicious,sowheneverfreehewouldbeatRose'shomewatchinghermakethesuperjam.
Suddenly,anideastruckGus.Probablyhecouldtrythattomakesomemoneyandhelphismum.HethenboughtabagofpotatoesforRoseforherkindofferofwonderfuljam.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为100左右;
2.至少使用3个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分为一段,开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Thenextmorning,GusrangRose'sdoorbell.
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【答案】Thenextmorning,GusrangRose'sdoorbell.RoseopenedthedoorandthenGushandedthebagofpota