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综合写作
综合写作模板
开头段:
Thereadingpassageisconcernedwiththeissueof(of后面转述总的讨论话题,语法方面只能填名词,名词短语或者how/what/whether/why引导的从句)Theprofessor'slectureconcentratesonthesameissue.However,he/she(必须根据说话人的声音选出一个)arguesthat(教授关于讨论话题的总论点),whichclasheswithwhatthereadingindicates.Andinthelecture,he/she(只能选择一个代词)usesthreespecificpointstobackuphis/her(仍然只能选择一个)pointofview.
主体段1:
First,eventhoughthereadingpassagesuggeststhat(此处转述阅读段落中的第一个分论点,后面如果还跟有支持的句子也不妨从阅读段落里再转述一两句支持句过来,拿分!
),theprofessorarguesinthelecturethat(教授的第一个反驳分论点)Thisisbecause(转述professor第一个分论点后面的支持句),whichsuggeststhat(最好能再深入写半句professor对其第一个分论点的支持句,但如果实在写不出,就把前半句再转述一下)Evidently,theprofessor'sargumentdisproves(证明……不正确,学术词汇)itscounterpart(对应物,此指reading中的第一个分论点)inthereading.
主体段2:
Additionally,despitethestatementinthereadingthat(转述阅读段子里的第二个分论点,如果后面还能从段子里转述过来一两句引申最好),theprofessorcontendsthat(转述教授的第二个反驳论点)Thenhe/shesupportsthispointwiththefactthat(professor对其第二个分论点的支持句)Inotherwords,(继续转述)
主体段3:
Finally,theprofessorassertsthat(转述第三个反驳分论点)whereastheauthorofthereadingclaimsthat(转述阅读文章作者的第三个分论点)Theprofessorconfirmsthatthisclaimisindefensiblebypointingoutthat(教授第三个分论点的支持句)-i.e.(再引申一两句,如果实在写不出字数也够了)
结尾段(可省):
Inconclusion,theprofessorclearlydiscerns(确定)theweaknesses(弱点)inthreadingpassageandconvincinglyrevealsthatthefundamentalargumentinthereading,-thatis,(转述阅读文章对讨论话题的总论点)isincorrect.
isconcernedwith:
explores,analyzes,examine,dealswith,isabout,focuseson,concentrateson,investigates(在学术写作中表示“深入调查”)
issue:
Subject,topic
lecture
Speech,talk,thelisteningpassage,thepresentation
concentrateson:
explores,analyzes,examine,dealswith,isabout,focuseson,isconcernedwith,investigates(在学术写作中表示“深入调查”)
However,
But/Yet/Evenso,/Despitethat,
argue
thinks,believes,asserts,claims,contends,maintains(这个词用得比较大,但在写citation和quotation当中时常能见到),insists,states,indicates
clasheswith
Contradicts,challenges,directlycontradicts,conflictswith,denies,opposes,isopposedto,runscounter/contraryto,isexactlytheoppositeof,ispreciselytheoppositeof,makes...seemweak/incorrect/inaccurate/wrong/dubious/doutful,provesthat...isspecious,raisesdoubtsabout,puts...indoubt,throws...intodoubt
usethreespecificpoints:
Makesthreespecificpoints,usesampleevidence,offersplentyofevidence,presentssufficientevidence,providessomecompellingarguments,showsenoughevidence,revealsthreepiecesofevidence
backup:
support/back(vt.)/confirm/buttress,strengthen/bolster/advocate
pointofview
view,opinion,viewpoint,understanding,perspective,conception,notion,belief,position
First:
eventhough:
Although,while,whereas
because:
due/owingto(只能接名词不能接从句)
...whichsuggeststhat...:
...whichmeans.../andthismeansthat.../-thatistosay,.../-i.e.,/Inotherwords,/Specifically,(最后这两个要断句,前面改为句号)
Evidently:
Obviously,Apparently,Clearly
disproves:
见clashwith的替换词
Additionally,:
spite:
inoppositionto,contraryto,insharpcontrastto,instarkcontrastto,inmarkedcontrastto,innoticeablecontrastto,inspiteof
contends:
见argue替换词
finally
asserts:
见argue替换词
whereas:
while/Incontrast,(改成句号形成断句)/eventhough/although
confirms:
proves,shows,verifies
indefensible:
veryweak,specious,spurious
Inconclusion,:
clearly(清晰地):
precisely,exactly,correctly
discerns:
finds,identifies,determines,pinpoints,ascertains,discovers
weaknesses:
flaws,weaklinks
convincingly:
compellingly,forcefully,successfully,impressively
reveal:
prove,show
fundamentalargument:
centralargument,mainidea,mainargument,mainpoint
incorrect:
inaccurate,wrong,indefensible,inadequate,unconvincing,speciousatbest(充其量也就是)
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