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MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIllive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp

WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus,Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilechat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere！

MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.

ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcooked

inkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritiest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother’sDay！

”Momwasgratefulandmoving

DearBob,

Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriend,andgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafew

subject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalotinmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames?

Whatyourfavoritesport?

Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.

Yours,LiHua

MyFavoriteSport

Myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.WepractiseforthreetimeseveryweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepmindthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.Also,thesportteachesustheimportantofobedience（服从）.Eachplayermustobeycaptain,whoistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.

TheProblemwithTelevision

NowIcan’twatchmuchtelevisionbutafewyearsagoIwasusedtowatchiteverynight.Iwasoftenalittletiredafteraday’sworkandwatchTVdemandsverylittleeffort.Unfortunate,therearetoomanypeopleamongmyfamily.Somewantedtoseetheprogrammewhileotherspreferredanother.IamhappywithanyprogrammebuttheothersspentalottimearguingandtherewasnowayofsettlethematterexceptbysellingtheTVset.Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.

DearPeter,

ThanksverymuchoninvitingmetoyourbirthdaypartyonSunday.I’dlikeverymuchcomebuthadanexaminationonMondaymorning.ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.I’llspendallthewholeweekendreadingandprepareforit.SoI’mreallysorrythatIwon’tbeabletocomeinthistime.Hopeyoucanunderstand.I’lltakethischancewishyouwonderfultimeonyourbirthday.Happybirthday,Peter,andmayhappyreturnoftheday!

Yours,LiMing

ThedaybeforethespeechcontestEnglishteachertalkedtome.Shesaidthatsheandmyschoolmateallwishedmesuccess,butitdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.WhenIwasinthestagethenextday,IfeltsonervousasIshooklikealeaf.Thereweresomanypeoplepresent!

Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.Ididagoodjobandwonthefirstprize.Nowmypictureandtheprizeishanginginthelibrary.WheneverIseethemIwilloftenthinkofmyEnglishteacher.

Likemostofmyschoolmates.Ihaveeitherbrothersnorsisters,inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagood

education.Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkatfamily;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,butwedonotseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitorandaguest.Dotheyreallyunderstandtheirowndaughter?

Whatthingsareinotherhomes,Iwonder.

LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daytriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryone

knows.it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimal.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.

WhenIfirstlearnedwriteinEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedherandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryand

showedtomyteacher.shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.

DearRalph,

I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemy

classmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingswellasthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasfool.SoIfeelunhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthattheydon'tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswe

becomestrangeratonce.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo?

Yours,XiaoWei

DearMr.Brown,

Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp.Beforeyoucametoteachus,Ihadnotinterest

inEnglish.Mypronunciationwasterribly.Icouldonlyspeakafewwords.Butoneandahalfyearlater,InowthinkEnglishfuntolearn.Igotalotoffromyourencouragingwords.Iwillalwaysrememberwhatyousaid,“Ifyoutryto,youcanbeNo.1!

”Ihopeyou’vehadpleasantjourneyhomeandwillcometoChinaagainsometimesinthefuture.Iwillwriteagainandsendyouthephotoswetaketogether.

Yourssincerely,LiMin

AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEnglandinthe

balloonin1784.Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebiggerandbigger.Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquickandtheballoonwascomingup.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.Itstartedtorisehigheragain.Soitwasstilltooclosetothewater.Finally,thementhrewawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.ThecrowdwaitingfortogreettheminEnglandwasverysurprisedseethiswhentheballoonlandedinfrontofthem

WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelago.Theydidnotwantbreakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.Icameinthelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewaslookingforaglassthecupboard.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,“WhatcanIdo?

Weareguestsafterall.”

DearGrandpa,

Thankyouforyourletter.Myschoolisorganizingabasketballteamandthere’sjustachancewhichIcanjoinit.I'mlittleofcourse,butterriblyquickandbravely.Whiletheothersarejumpingaboutintheair,Icanrunundermylegsandgettheball.Itwillbelotsoffunforpracticingoutintheplaygroundintheafternoonwiththetreearoundusallredandyellowandeverybodylaughingandshout.ThesearethehappiergirlsI'veeverseenandI'mthehappiestinall!

ImeanttowritelongletterandtellyouallthethingsI'mdoingatschool,bu