高二英语短文改错专练.docx

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高二英语短文改错专练

短文改错

01

DearJim,

I'dliketoinviteyoufordinnerinaChineserestaurantinLosAngeles.Icanimaginehowsurprisingyouare!

Infact,Iamtherevisitingmyuncle,whohappenedtobeworkinginthecityatpresent.

TheChineserestaurantnamingNewPandaBuffetprovidesgenuineChinesefood,wheremanydinershavegiven5-starreviews.Itislocatedat5120RodeoRd,LosAngeles.Couldyoucomeat6p.m.onFriday?

Bytheway,Iwillpresentyouwithagosetthen.IreallyappreciatethatyouhavedonetohelpmewithmyEnglishduringthepasttwoyears.Butyou,IwouldnothavemadesuchagreatprogressinEnglish.

Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply!

Yours’

LiHua

02

Ihaveamuscledisease,soIcan’trunorclimbstairsasquickasotherpeople.OneproblemisIdon’tlookanydifferentwithotherpeople.SosomechildreninmyprimaryschoollaughedwhenIgotoutofthebreathafterrunningashortway.Nowmylifeisaloteasierathighschoolbecausemyfellowstudentshadacceptedme.Iamverybusywithnotimetofeelsorryforme.Mydreamistoworkforafirmthatdevelopcomputersoftware.Haveadisabilitydoesnotmeanyourlifeisnotsatisfied.Sodon’tfeelsorryforthedisabledandmakefunofthem.

03

Asisknow,thereisnothingnicethanbeingpraisedbyourteachers.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Ididn'tdaretospeakinthepublic.WhenmyEnglishteacheraskedmetoansweraquestion,Iwasalwaystoonervoustoanswerit,whatmademeverysad.

Oneday,theteacheraskedmecometohisoffice,wherehetoldmetoreciteatext.Ireciteditfluent.TheteacherpraisedmeandtoldmeIwouldreciteitthenextdaybeforemyclassmate.ItoldhimthatIwastoonervous,soheinsistedthatIshoulddoit.Thenextmorning,IwasaskedtorecitethetextthatIhaveprepared.AlthoughIdidpoorly,theteacherpraisedmeverymuch.Iwassoproudofmethatday.

04

MyfriendLiLeiusedtobequietinourclassbecausehewasshortorfat.Everyday,hecametoschoolontimeandsitathisdesksilent.Hewassoashamedofhimthatheevendarenotholduphishead.Seenhiminsuchabadstate,Idecidedtohelphim.First,Ishowedhimanimportanceofbeingconfidentandleadinganactivelife.

Besides,Iinvitedhimplaywithusafterclass.Gradually,hebegantojoininusinsomesportsgamesandotheractivities.NowheevenhasthecouragestoanswerquestionsinClass.Iamsohappythatwithmyhelphehavemadesomuchprogress.

LiHua

05

DuringthelastSpringFestival,IgetlotsofmoneybygrabbingtheredenvelopethroughWeChat.ButnowIamlostinmythought—whetheritreallydoesgoodtopeople,especialyoungchildren,sincethesmartphoneisnowsopopular.Frommypointofview,itdoesmoreharmsthangoodtoyoungchildreniftheyareaddictingtograbbingtheredenvelope.Ononehand,theywillthinkit’ssoeasytogetmuchmanymoney.Justbygrabbingtheycangetit.Ontheotherhand,spendtoomuchtimeonwhichhasnothingtodowiththeirstudieswillneverbenefitforthem.It’sbadtoeitheryoungpeople’smentalhealthandphysicalhealth.

06

WiththegrowingpopularityoftheInternet,moreandmorechildrenareaddictedtoplayonlinegamesdayandnight.Itdoesharmnotonlytoourhealth,especiallytotheireyes,butalsototheirstudies.

Comparingwithonlinegames,manytraditionalgames,likehide-and-seek,benefitskidsmentallyandphysically.Theywereeverpopulartoseveralgenerations,whichnotonlylearnedsomethingvaluablebutalsohadfunplayingthegames.Therefore,thegamesaredyingawaynow.

Personal,Ithinkteachersandparentsshouldtakemeasurestolimittheirchildren'sInternettime.Letchildrentoknowtheharmofonlinegamesandthebenefitsoftraditionalgames.Helpchildrenjudgethehealthyandunhealthygames.What'smore,weshouldoftenorganizeeventsforchildreninwhichtraditionalgamesplayed.

07

Inmysparetime,Ioftenreadsomebookswrittenbyfamouswritersinorabroad.IeverreadChina’sFourGreatClassicalnovelsuchasJourneytotheWest.Beside,IenjoyreadingTangpoetry.

IhavebeenwritingfromIwasnineyearsold.IamrememberthefirsttimemyparentsandItalkedaboutmydreamofbecomingwriter.TheylaughedouthappywhentheyreadtheshortstoryIwriteaboutrobots.TheythinkthatmystoryiswellworthreadandthatIamgoodatwriting.IbelieveIwillachievetheirdream.

08

DearJeremyandAlice,

Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.

We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.

Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.

Sincerely,

JackandRose

09

Ilikeeatingfruitsandvegetables,whatareofgreatbenefittoourhealthy.Notonlydotheypreventusfromfallingtoill,buttheyhelpusloseweight.Iusedtohatevegetables,butfollowingthedoctor’sadvice,Igradualkickedthebadhabit.

Justasanoldsayinggoing,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”However,therearestillmanychilddislikingfruitsandvegetables.Oncontrary,influencebythisorthatkindofadvertisement,manywerecrazyaboutjunkfood.Consequently,theybecomeweakerandweakerinsteadofgettingstrong.Inmyopinion,wemusttakeactiontochangeit.

10

Highschoolisregardedasthebesttimeofmylife.Besideclassesandhomework,therehassomethingmorethatIespeciallytreasure.Inordertoleavetheschoolwithnoregrets,I’llmakeuseofmylimittimetoreviewthelessonsI’velearned.

Meanwhile,I’dliketoshowmygratitudetoalltheteacherswhohasgivenmesomuchhelpinthepastthreeyears.Inaddition,thisisnecessaryformetohaveatalkwithwhomighthavemisunderstoodme,forIdocareaboutthefriendshipbetweenus.Forthepurposeofimprovingmyself,I’llaskmyclassmatessomeadvicewhichmaybeofgreatvaluetome.Withthesethingdone,Iwillhavenoregretsinmyschoollife.

11

OnlastFriday,eveningfell,butmyparentdidn’tcomebackhomeyet.Thoughtaboutthesupper,Istoppeddoingmyhomeworkanddecidingtomakeamealformyfamilyinsteadofjustwaiting.

Itwasmyfirstcooking.IsurfedInternetwithmycellphonetogetthedetailedinformationsonhowtodohomelydishes.Withthestep-by-stepdirections,Imanagedtomakemyfirstdish.ThenItriedtocookanother.Untilmyparentscamebackhome,theycouldn’tbelievehiseyes，seeingthedishesmadebyme.Whilemymumwastakenpictures,mydadcouldn’twaittohaveatasteandgavemethethumbsup.

Iwouldliketopreparemoremealstomyfamily

12

NowadaysinChina,eitherinthemorningnorafterdinner,people,especialelderlywomen,willgatherinsquarestodancetopopularmusic.Moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealsoparticipatingthesquaredancenow.

Therearemanyreasonsfortheirpopularity.Firstofall,Chinahasmadeagreatprogressinthesocialandeconomicdevelopmentinthepastdecades,andpeoplehadmoretimeandenergytoenjoytheirlife.Besides,dothesquaredanceisagoodwayforpeopletogetfit.

However,dancersplayloudmusicandoccupylotsofpublicplaces,wheremakesmanypeopleannoying.Maybesquaredancersneedtomakesomechange.

13

Itookpartinateenagesummercamplastmonth.Wehelpedatanationalparkinaweek.Wediddifferentthingseveryday,butIdidgetabitofannoyedbecausewehadcheesesandwicheseverylunchtime.Itreallywasfunny,althoughweworkedincrediblyhardly.Oneday,theschedulewaschangedatthelastminute,butinsteadofourplannedactivities,weallhelpthestafftofinishcuttingtheweedsbythelake.Thatwastoughestday—andalsothebest.Everyday,wetookturnstocookinteamsoffifth.Whenitwasourteam’sturns,wemadeasimpledinnerforeveryone.Judgebythefactthattherewasnothingleft,Ithinkthattheirteamdidagreatjob.

14

Abouttwoyearsago,Iworkedhardandenteredalocallykeyschool,whichmyparentswereproudofit.Fromthenup,Igotupearlyandgottotheschoolontime.Afterschool,Iwentbackhomeintimetohelpmyparentsdosomehouseworkwhileenjoysomelightmusic.However,onedaymymotherpersuadingmetoliveatschooltolearntobeindependent,preparingthefuturelife.AsIwasunhappy,Iunderstoodmyparentsandfollowtheiradvice.Beforelivingatschool,Ifoundithelpedmesavetimeandlearnwhattogetonwithothers.

15

HiThomas,

Howiseverythingwithyourecently?

I'mveryexcitingbecauseIhaveappliedforaholidayjob,taughtEnglishconversationinateachertrainingcollegenearShanghai.I’mabitofworriedbecauseIdon'tknowifIshouldbringsomepresentfortheteachersI’llmeet.Should1shakehandswhenImeetpeople,orjustsmiling?

Whattopicswillmystudentswanttotalkthen?

MightIsayordosomethingthatwillseemrudely?

Thismayseemunimportantwithyou,butIwanttoplaneverythinginadvance,orI'dlovetoknowwhatyouthink.YouhadbeentoChinabefore.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Allthebest,

Bruno

16

DearJack,

I’mveryhappytoknowthenewsyouareplanningtovisittomycity.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyarrive.There’reafewwell-knownplaceofinterestinmycity.I’dliketoshowyouarounditwhenyoucamehere.Timepermits,wecanw