高考英语作文写作技巧之看图作文.ppt
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英语作文的写作技巧之看图作文,请根据图画和所给词语的提示,叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。
然后,再根据此故事内容,发表你自己的感想(自拟),不得少于三点想法。
开头已给出。
Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover._,一、描写图片,说明所发生的事,左边一幅图,1.女孩跌倒2.小明要帮她3.小明的母亲阻拦他说:
“不要扶,否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。
”,如何变图片为文字左边一幅图1.Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.(试题中已给出)2.XiaoMingwantedtohelpthegirlup.3.Hismotherstoppedhimandsaid,“Dontdothat,otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown.”,右边一幅图,1.有一天,小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子2.小明说:
“我扶了,你会说是我碰倒的”,右边一幅图1.Anotherday,themothersawthefallenoilbottleontheground.2.XiaoMingsaidtohismother,(注意小明的话要用虚拟语气)“IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup,youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit.”,二、谈感想1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法:
不同意2.我想:
父母应该为孩子树立好榜样父母不仅要关心孩子的身体,还要关心他们的思想父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。
因为我们生活在社会这个大家庭中。
Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.2.Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildrenshealth,buttheirminds.Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Becauseweliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.,五、增加结尾句,整理成文Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.Hewantedtohelpthegirlup,buthismotherstoppedhimandsaid,“Dontdothat,otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown.”Anotherday,themotherwasshockedtoseeXiaoMingjustletthefallenoilbottlebe.sayingtohim,“Cantyouseethefallenoil?
Whycantyoustraightenitup?
”butXiaoMingsaidtohismother,“IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup,youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit.”Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildrenshealth,buttheirminds.Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Weliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.Everyoneshoulddosomethinggoodtobuildupoursociety,right?
例,WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven(2002上海高考题),1.描述图片whenachildislearningtoridebicycle,theparentsandgrandparentsaresweating,runningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself.,ItcanbeseenfromthepicturethatAccordingtotheabovepicture,wecanseethat,Inthepicture,wecanseethat,Inthispicturewecanseeagirllearningtorideabikewithherparentsandevengrand-parentsrunningaroundher,sweating.Obviously,theyintendtoprotectthechild,forfearthatshemightfalloffthegethurt.,2.陈述此图片反映的社会现象Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch.,Duetotheone-childpolicy,theonlykidsinmanyfamiliesareconsideredaskingsorqueens.Theparents,consciouslyorunconsciously,haveofferedtoomuchhelpandmaketoomanydecisionsforthekids,whichdefinitelyspoilthechildren.Asaresult,childrenbecomesodependentandincapablethattheymayfindithardtosurvivethefiercecompetitioninfuture.,表明自己的观点和想法,提出建议Asthisphenomenahasbeenbecomingafiercesocialissue,Manymeasurescanbetakentopreventitgettingmoreandmoreserious。
Astoparents,itsbetterforthemtoprovideguidanceaswellasopportunitiesforkidstofallandfail,astheyarerecognizedasaninevitablewaytogrowup.Whileforthechildren,itshightimethattheylearnedtosaynototheirparentsunnecessaryprotection.Atthesametime,youngastheyare,theyshouldmakeparentsbelievetheyareoldenoughtoaccumulate(累积)practicalexperienceinreallifeandpreparethemselvesforthefuture.Theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent.,总结Inconclusion,thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenkidsdependonthemselvesratherthantheirparentscantheygetmatureandfaceeverythingwithconfidenceandcourageinthefuture.,Formanychild,learningtobikecanbeafunexperience,butthisisnotthecaseswiththegirlinthepicture,whoobviouslyhasnofunatall.Forfearthatshemayfalloffthebike,herparentsareholdingthehandle,withhergrandmothergivingahardpushfrombehind.Thethreeadultsaredrippingwithsweatwhilethegitlissittingonthesaddlewonderingwhoactuallyislearningtobikeabike.Theyhavewithoutdoubtgonetoofarprotectingthegitl.Todaysparentsseemtobetooprotectiveoftheirchildren,whichcandeabarriertotheirgrowthanddevelopment.Rather,childrenshouldbeencouragedtolearntodothingsontheirown.Ofcourse,theyarelikelytorunintosetbacks,butitisthesesetbacksthatcanteachthemtobematureandindependent.Dont,