六级作文rangefinder.docx

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六级作文rangefinder

CET-6WritingRangeFinder

【SAMPLE1】

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Goodhabitsresultfromresistingtemptation.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpoint.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

14分

Incontemporarysociety,peopleareconfrontedwithnumerouskindsoftemptation,suchasfortune,fameandpower.Thisphenomenonmakesourgoodhabitsextremelyvulnerable.Inmypointofview,resistingtemptationwillundoubtedlyhelpustocultivategoodhabits.

ThiscanbeevidencedbythestoryofMengZi.InancientChina,MengZi’smothermovedtheirhomethreetimesinordertoprotectMengZifromtheinfluenceofunfavorablesurroundings.Asaresult,MengZidevotedhimselfwholeheartedlytostudyandbecameabrilliantandgreatscholar.

Failuretoresisttemptationresultsinpickingupbadhabitsandstopsusfromachievingourgoals.Forexample,ifweareondietweshouldgiveuptakingtoomuchdeliciousfood.Otherwisewewillbecomeoverweightbecauseofexcessiveeating.

Inanutshell,temptationisthebiggestbarrierwehavetoovercomeonourwaytoacquiringgoodhabits.Wearesupposedtohavenotonlyacleargoalbutalsostrongdetermination.Onlyinthisway,canwesticktoourgoodhabitsandbecomeprospectivebackbonesofsociety.

11分

Whatisknowntousisthatgoodhabitsarethekeytosuccess.Buthowtodevelopgoodhabits?

Iagreethesayingthat“Goodhabitsresultfromresistingtemptation”,becausetherearealwayshundredsofkindsofobstaclespreventingusfromhavinggoodhabits.Itcostalotoftimeandenergytodevelopgoodhabitsbuttemptationissomethingfewpeoplecanresist.Onlythosewhohavestrongwillscansaynotothem.

Takebreakingtrafficrulesasanexample.Somepeopletendtoruntheredlightorcrossthestreetwithoutpayingattentiontothetrafficlightsbecausetherearenopolicearound.Thecostofsuchtemptationisthatgoodhabitsaredamagedindoingso.Whenitcomestoourstudy,onlybyrefusingthetemptationofcomputergame,canwestudentsdevelopgoodstudyhabitsandachieveourgoals.

Inaword,resistingtemptationtobuildupgoodhabitsshouldbekeptinmindbyeveryone.Itcanencourageustolimitourselvesinordertodevelopintherightdirection.

8分

Thereisnodoubtthateverybodydesiretohavegoodhabits.Asregardtowaytoformgoodhabits,somepeopleproclaimthatgoodhabitsdependonthelivingcircumstancewhilesomepeopleareconvincedthatpersevenceplaysanindispensableroleinforminggoodhabits.However,somepeopleholdthat“Goodhabitsresultfromresistingtemptation”.

Naturally,theyhavereasonstosaythat.First,therearealotoftemptationruinourgoodhabits,suchascomputers,TVs,andtheInternet.Thesetoolsforentertainmentaresointerestingandattractingthattheywilleasilydistachourattentionfromstudy.Ifweindulgeplayingcomputergame,chattingonlineorwatchingTV,wewillleadalifeofdisorderandmess.Second,withoutastrongmindtoresisttemptation,wemayeasilybepersuadedintosomebadhabits.

AsfarasIamconcerned,goodhabitsdecideone’ssuccess.Intoday’sworld,itisvitaltoresisttemptationtoformgoodhabits.Onlyifwebearthisinmind,wewillbearighttrackandhaveasuccessfullife.

【SAMPLE2】

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledManandComputerbycommentingonthesaying,“Therealdangerisnotthatthecomputerwillbegintothinklikeman,butthatmanwillbegintothinklikethecomputer.”Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

14分

Withtherapiddevelopmentofmoderntechnology,therearemoreandmoresmartcomputersthatcanthinklikeman.Thishasrousedmuchconcernaboutthepossiblethreattheymayposeonhumanbeings.However,whatdeservesmoreattentionisthephenomenonthatmanisstartingtothinklikecomputers.

Tobeginwith,we’reover-emphasizingtheimportanceofthinkingaccuratelyandlogicallysothatwe’relosingcreativity.Withoutcreativity,theworldwouldgraduallystopevolvingandcometoanend.

Besides,thinkinglikethecomputermeansproducingresultsinstandardmethods.Tosolvedifferentproblems,weneedflexibleapproaches,whilepreviousinputcanonlybeappliedtoalimitednumberofcases.

Moreover,computerslackemotion.Ifallhumanmindsthinkinthesamewaylikethosecoldmachines,theemotionalbondsbetweenoneandanotherwillbreakupandthiswillleadtothebreakdownofhumansociety.

Inconclusion,manthinkinglikethecomputerisverydangerous.Weshouldgivemoreemphasistocreativity,flexibilityandhumanemotion,sothatthehumanracecanhaveamorebeautifulprospect.

11分

Withourtechnologieshighlydeveloping,thecomputersarebecomingmorepowerful.Someofcomputerscaneven“think”likehumanbeings.Thismakessomepeoplefeelthatitisdangerousforus.Butothersthinkitwouldbeworseifmanbegintothinklikethecomputer.

Whatmakesushumanbeingsdifferentfromvariousspeciesisthatwehaveouruniquethoughts,whichcombinewisdomandintelligence.Whenweallthinkthewaythecomputerdoes,humanscannotcreatenewinnovativeproductsandourstepsmovingforwardwouldbesloweddownorevenstop.

Besides,thinkinglikemachinecouldalsomeanthatwearenotabletochangetonewsituations.Althoughthecomputerispowerful,itcanonlydocomplexjobsfast.Itcannotdealwithnewproblems.Ifwethinklikethecomputer,wecannotimaginewhatwillhappentous,whenfacedwithsuprisedsituation.

Allinall,weshouldallfeelthedangerifmanbeginstothinklikethecomputer,andweshouldalsokeepourmindssmarttobuildabetterworld.

8分

Nowadays,therelationshipbetweenmanandcomputerarebroughtintofocusresultedfromthepopularityofcomputers.Andthereisasaying“Therealdangerisnotthatthecomputerwillbegintothinklikeman,butthatmanwillbegintothinklikethecomputer”.Andlotsofpeopleareforthisperspective.

Ontheonehand,it’sdangerousforhumanracetothinklikethecomputeraccountingforthelackofcreation.Asweallknow,computerscomplywiththerulesofthinkingandarenotabletocreate.However,it’screationandimaginationthatimpovesanddevelopsthesociety.Ontheotherhand,it’stheemotionsofhumanthatcomputershardlyimitate.Howhorribleitwasifpeopleareallcold-bloodandhavenofeelings.Imaginetheworldchangedintoaplacewithouthappiness,sorrowandothereffections.Thenyoucansaythat“humanbeings”havedisappearedfromtheearth.

AndIgivemyvotetothisperspective.Thinkinglikecomputersdeprivehumanbeingscreationandemotions.It’sdangerousandleadstoextinctionofhumanrace.

【SAMPLE3】

CET-4Writing-2

14分

Asisshowninthepicture,ateacherofaliteratureclassishandingathickbooktoherstudentandsays,“Justthinkofitasifyouarereadingalongtext-message”,butthestudentseemstobereceivingitreluctantly.Itrevealsacommonphenomenonthatthesignificanceofreadingliteraturehasnotbeenrealizedbymanystudents.

However,readingliteratureissoimportantthatwecan’tignore.First,literatureisthefruitofhumanwisdom,whichenrichesourknowledgeandbroadensourhorizons.Moreover,literaturereadingcangiveusaninsightintolifeandhelpusunderstandlifebetter.Finally,literatureistothecultureofacountrywhatwateristofish.Readingliteraturenotonlybringspersonalbenefits,butalsopromotesoursenseofculturalidentity.

Allinall,readingliteratureisapleasureratherthantheburdenfromstudy.Ifweunderstandthevalueofitwecanobtaintheproperattitudetowardit.