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Whenpeoplearevisitingwildlifeparks,theyliketotakephotographswithanimals.Reasonsforthisarevaried.Somepeoplemaythinktakingphotoswithanimalsarefunnyincontrastwithtakingphotoswithotherpersons.Othersmaythinkthatitwillbeaninterestingexperiencetotakephotoswithanimalsduringtheirvisit.
IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Iwouldfeelannoyedwhenpeoplekeepphotographingwithme.MylifewouldbegreatlyinfluencedandIwouldn‘tfeelhappyatall!
IthinkIshouldhavesomeprivatespaceandtimetorelaxmyself.
However,Idon’tagreeifitisannouncedillegaltotakephotoswithanimals.Touristspayforticketstovisitthewildlifeparkanditwillbeapityforthemiftheycan’thaveaphotowithananimal.Perhapswildlifeparkscansetsomespecialtime,duringwhichtouristscantakephotoswithanimals.Itcanbothsatisfytouristsandprotecttheanimals.
◆主题句的定义:
段落主题句就是全段的核心,统帅全段,并决定全段的发展方向。
全段其他句子都是围绕主题句,对其进行说明、支持或扩展的,这些句子称作“扩展句(supportingsentence)”。
◆主题句的模式:
一、引出经历
1.时间、地点和起因。
【讲述一次想家的经历】
(11广东)
LikeSam,eachofusmay___________________missingourfamily,_____________(包括我在内).
2.你或你同学的做兼职的经历。
Thisanunforgettableexperienceofmypart-timejob.Ionce___________________________________.
3.上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师(2012年广东高考)
Afterreadingthisstory,itsuddenlymyrespectableteacherMissWang,anEnglishteacherwhoalwayscarriesabigsmileonherface.
二、重述要点
这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问,而是翻译要点作为段落的主题句,例如,要点是“谈谈……的重要性”,主题句则为“……有重要作用”,要点是“谈谈……有何重要意义”,主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。
1.同学们对周末补课的不同看法。
(11清远一模)
Students_______________________________ontakingclassesatweekends.
2.在生活中谅解他人有何意义?
FromthestoryIlearnthatunderstandingandforgivingothers___________________inourlife.
3.掌握急救知识的重要性
AsfarasI’mconcerned,forustoknowsomeknowledgeaboutfirstaid.
4.你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。
(2012年广东高考)
(事实上),theteachers(起着非常重要的作用)thestudyandlifeofthestudents,whenheorsheisgrowingupfromakidtoapolite,thoughtfulandresponsibleperson.
三、回答要点:
写作要点是询问考生的看法时,用对提问作出明确回答的句子作为主题句。
1.你愿意与人分享吗?
Personally,_______________tosharewithothers.
2.假设你当时就在事故现场,你是伸出援助之手还是袖手旁观?
IfItobepresentatthescene,Itohishelpandsenthimtothenearesthospitalordial120forhelp.
3.吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被称为“最美妈妈”,请谈谈你对此感受。
IbyWuJupingwhosavedthetwo-yearoldbaby.
四、明示观点:
明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同。
1.你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。
(10广东)
AsfarasIamconcerned,____________________themeasureofpayingstudentstostudy.
或者(我不支持)encouragingkidswithcashjusttheyhavegotgoodmarks.
2.你对中学生博客的态度。
(11广州调研)
Asformyself,I________student-blogging.
3.你是否赞成推迟高中早上的上课时间。
(10佛山一模)
Inmyview,____________withtheideatodelaytheopeningoftheschooldayofSeniorSchool.
五、引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等
1.说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施:
Luckily,moreandmoremeasurestoprotecttheenvironment.
2.你认为应该如何应付考试紧张?
Severaleffectivemethodscantheproblemoffeelingnervousinexams.
【Practice1】请根据各个写作要点,写出主题句。
(1)Tom来信说他现在学习压力大,请谈谈你读信后的感受。
_______________________________________________________________________________
(2)你或你同学的留堂经历。
(2011佛山一模)
_______________________________________________________________________________
(3)你是如何处理压岁钱的?
(2012佛山二模)
(4)你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法?
(2012广州二模)
______________________________________________________________________________
(5)你从故事中学到了什么道理?
(2009广州二模)
(6)中学生活和大学生活的差别。
(2008广东)
(7)建设绿色校园的重要性。
(2011东山中学)
(8)你的父母是如何鼓励你学习的?
(2010年广东)
(9)你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施?
(10)越来越多人又开始骑自行车的原因。
(11)你认为应该如何应付考试紧张?
_______________________________________________________________________________
(12)我们为什么要遵守规章制度?
________________________________________________________________________________
(13)你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法?
(14)你对考试作弊的看法。
(2011揭阳二模)
(15)你对高中生带手机到学校有什么看法?
(16)你对失败的看法或态度。
(2009汕头一模)
【Practice2】请根据各个写作要点,写出段落的主题句。
1.以约120个词就“熄灯一小时”活动发表看法,包括如下要点:
(2011年深圳二模)
(1)你是否赞成这种做法并说明理由;
(2)你是否动员你的家人或你周围的人参加此活动?
(3)日常生活中为了保护环境我们还可以做些什么?
2.以约120个词就“家庭氛围(familyatmosphere)”的主题发表看法,内容包括:
(1)你是否赞同作者的观点;
(2)你理想的家庭生活氛围;
(3)给父母提出建议。
早晚读材料:
读写任务写作模版
一、界定看法,分析原因
【分析原因】
1.分析微博受欢迎的原因。
Microblogisextremelypopularnowadays,especiallyamongyoungpeople.Thereasonsareasfollows.Foronething,peoplecannotonlysharemessages,pictures,videosandmusicthroughmicroblog,butalsocommentonothers’ideasandcommunicatewithothers.Foranother,limitedtoexactly140characters,itisveryshort,andthususerscanshareandreadmessagesinashorttime.
2.分析中学生熬夜的原因。
AsfarasIknow,plentyofhighschoolstudentsstayuplateoccasionally,andsomeevenhaveformedthehabitofsleepinglate.Thereasonsarevaried.Somestudentsstayuplateinordertoreadmorebooksordomoreexercises,whileothersarejustaddictedtocertainactivitiessuchasplayingcomputergames.
【推演观点,分步解说原因】
1.提议一个可以融洽与父母关系的方法,并说明原因。
AsfarasIamconcerned,havingfamilyactivitiessuchasfamilytripsandpartiesisagreatwaytobuildastrongerrelationshipwithourparents.Myreasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,wecangetabetterunderstandingofeachotherthroughcommunication.Then,activitiesprovideuswitharelaxingenvironment,whichmakesiteasierforustoexpressourfeelings.Finally,wemaybecomemoreintimatejustbecausewearetogether.
2.你想去哪个城市旅游?
说明原因。
ThecitythatIwanttotraveltomostisParisandIhavethreereasons.First,asacitywithalonghistory,Parisattractsmewithitscolorfulcultureandsplendidbuildings.Second,Parisisfamousforitsdelicateanddeliciouscuisine,whichIamtotallynotimmuneto.Third,romanceaddstothecharmofParis,drawingmetoexplore.
3.当你学校上受挫时,你会找谁倾诉?
为什么?
WhenIamdiscouragedinmystudies,Iprefertotalktomyteachers.Asteachersarefamiliarwithsuchproblems,theycanbequickinprovidingmewitheffectivesuggestions.Besides,whentheyareawareoftheexistenceofsuchproblems,theymaypaymoreattentiontoimprovingtheirclassesinordertoreduceourproblems,whichisbeneficialtoourstudy.
【界定看法,分步解说原因】
◆赞成类◆
1.你是否赞成评选“三好学生”?
说明原因。
I’mfullsupportoftheselectionofoutstandingstudentssinceitisbeneficialtomoststudents.Fortheexcellentstudents,itisarecognitionoftheirhardworkandintelligence,whichencouragesthemtobelievemore.Fortheworse-performingones,itattractsthemtomakeprogress,thusdrivingthemtoworkharder.
2.你是否赞成把军训列为新生必修课?
Ican’tagreemorewiththeideathatmilitarytrainingbemadenecessaryforfreshstudentsandmyviewisbasedonthefollowingreasons.Inthefirstplace,throughtoughexercise,militarytraininghelpsstudentsbuilduptheirbody.Then,ithelpsstudentsgetridofbadhabitsandformgoodones.Lastbutnotleast,itstrengthensstudents’mentalcapability.
3.结合实际情况,说说你认为你们学校是否应该配备校车。
AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisnecessaryforourschooltobeequippedwithschoolbuses.Ifschoolbusserviceisprovided,westudentscanhavefunreadingourfavoritebooksorhavinginterestingconversationswithourclassmatesonthebus,insteadofspendingalongtimestrugglingonbike,worriedaboutbeinglateforschool.Besides,oursafetycanbebetterensured,whichsavesourparentsfromdeepworrieseveryday.
◆反对类◆
1.你认为家长陪读的做法是好是坏?
Idon’tthinkitwisethatparentsrentahouseneartheschoolandaccompanystudentsstudyingforthereasonthatitbringsharmfuleffects.Forthestudents,withparents’company,theyaremorelikelytofallintothehabitofdependence,whichhasanegativeeffectontheirfuturedevelopment.Fortheparents,itmeansthattheirworkandrestwillbeseriouslyaffected.
2.你认为举办动物园运动会是对是错?
Personally,Idon’tthinkholdinganimalsportsmeetingisreasonable.Myreasonsareasfollows.Firstly,lotsofperformancesareverydangerousandanimalsgetinjuredeasily.Secondly,tobequalifiedforsportsmeetings,animalshavetosufferalotduringthetrainingprocess.Lastbutnotleast,suchsportsmeetingscreateanimpressiononpeople,especiallychildren,thatanimalsaretobetrainedandcontrolled,whichmayleadtotheirtreatinganimalsbadlyinthefuture.
二、分析利弊,重要性
1.有学校给学生配备iPad作为学习工具,这样做有什么好处?
AlthoughprovidinganiPadforeachstudentisextremelyexpensive,itisalsoofbenefittostudents.Withonly650ginweight,iPadfreestudentsfromheavyschoolbags,doinggoodtotheirhealth.Moreimprotantly,curiosityaroused,studentstendtospendmoretimestudyingwithaniPad,whichishelpfultotheirstudies.
2.说说现在很多学生盲目追求“留学热”的弊端。
Thoughgoi